That is the dumbest story I have EVER read, even if it is supposed to be a parody.
Critics are probably the most annoying creatures on Earth (after banksters and lawyers of course). Why do they feel the need to make up stupid shit to criticize others' writing...oh, I know, they don't have a clue how to write an entertaining story themselves, so they have to rag on everyone else to make themselves feel better. I think Stephen King said it best when he said "F**K critics".Here is the original Mary Stu litmus test written by a blogger who actually has the gaul to call himself Doctor Merlin.
http://www.ponylandpress.com/ms-test.html
Superman gets a 73 on this test, Merlin ranks up at 65, Jesus gets a whopping 110, and Enoch gets a 106 (not my Enoch, the one from the Book of Enoch).
This term has got to go.
And how in the hell is Wesley Crusher a Marty Stu? That doesn't even make sense.I say this because supposedly "professional" literary critics and writers are now using the term.
http://www.storyentertainment.com/ow/ow.asp?MarySue